When I decided to write Love & Freedom, a book about an American woman coming to England to find her English mother, I spotted an obvious pitfall.
But ‘being’ an American can’t be all that hard, right? I see them and their country on my television every day, my brother lives in America, Americans speak English.
I knew that American moms bake cookies and British mums bake biscuits but, quite quickly, I discovered that entire dictionaries have been written on the differences between American English and British English. So I bought one, enticingly entitled Bum Bags and Fanny Packs. And believe me I consulted it.
I realised that I needed an American.
And then she read the entire manuscript for me and pointed out all kinds of errors I didn’t even know were errors.
I got so far into the heart and head of Honor, using this method, that I’m actually not quite out of it, although the book is written, edited, produced and goes on sale on 1 June. I keep automatically ‘translating’ or thinking about how eccentric English people seem or what a cool place Brighton is. I’ve even been known to exclaim, ‘Holy freakin’ Joe!’ I feel quite proud.
Love & Freedom will be published by Choc Lit on 1 June 2011. You can preorder it now or read the first two chapters. And you can listen to a recording of the FREE prequel chapter here.
Sue Moorcroft writes romantic novels of dauntless heroines and irresistible heroes for Choc Lit. Combining that success with her experience as a creative writing tutor, she’s written a ‘how to’ book, Love Writing – How to Make Money From Writing Romantic and Erotic Fiction (Accent Press). Sue also writes short stories, serials, articles and courses and is the head judge for Writers’ Forum. She's a Katie Fforde Bursary Award winner.
Check out her website http://www.suemoorcroft.com/ and her blog at http://suemoorcroft.wordpress.com/ for news and writing tips. You’re welcome to befriend Sue on Facebook or Follow her on Twitter.
All of Sue’s Choc Lit novels and Love Writing are available as ebooks.
5 comments:
Sue, impressive, your research and what you put into your story! Best of luck with sales.
Since I'm not familiar with other cultures, even here in America, except superficially, I do stay away from writing those kind of characters.
Congratulations, Sue, on your latest release! 'Love and Freedom' sounds fascinating and I love the cover!
Sue--I admire your writiing about an American. Even though I have had two lovely friends who were British, I wouldn't remotely consider using one as a character.
We all have much to learn. On a tour in Europe one year, I met a British lady and her daughter. I said something about the English, and she really, really got her back up. She informed me she was British, even though she lived in London, and "Engliah" was incorrect. I've never forgotten that, and I'm not ever certain if that's correct. But believe me, I avoid any such terms now.
I thought it might be something akin to saying "I'm Texan," when a foreigner might say, but "aren't you an American?"
I congratulate you on your release, and wish all the best for you. Celia
Great post, Sue. And it emphasises that we don't always know what we think we know. At least as members of this blog we have lots of friends we can ask for assistance.
Such an enjoyable n informative post!:)
Lindsay, I especially loved the fact that your blog gives short stories n novellas a chance, something missing on many book blogs! I am following u now!:)
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